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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Friday, 12 August 2016

Provocation - Olympics Venues

L.I: TO consider both points of view / Opinion / Perspectives when forming an opinion. 
To make our informed opinion we have to consider both side of the perspectives into forming a opinion. The question we have to answer was Should host countries have to spend so much money on building Olympic venues? I say no because once they build the venue for the Olympic games what would they use it for when the Olympic are over. My partner said yes because, It showcases the countries, it increases tourism and it bring money / Jobs opportunities to the who wants a job. We have picked a picture of a before and after pictures of the Beijing Olympic venue. 

Tuesday, 24 May 2016

Punctuation


This is a me and my partner's did for writing. We did a challenge that I had to fix a a tweet. We had to use Commas and Full Stops to rerrange her tweet around to make it sounds good and interesting.

Wednesday, 4 May 2016

Dog Report

Dog Report

Dogs are my favorite animal. They can be your best friend. I think dogs are a lot of fun. There are different kinds of dogs but they all need: food, special equipment, and care.
There are lots of different kinds of dogs. Dogs come in all sorts of different breeds, some dogs are mixed breeds. Some of the most well known breeds are: German Shepherd, Poodle, Spaniel, Labrador, and Boxer. Sometimes mixed breeds have some funny names. For example if you cross a labrador and a poodle you have a labradoodle.

When you're feeding your dog. There are three things that you can feed your dog. You can feed them: Jelly meat, Dog Roll, and Biscuits. The reason we have to feed them is to get them lot of energy to go on walk, play games and be active.  But you don’t feed them chocolate because it is poisonous to dogs.

You must have a equipment if you have a dog. The equipment you need is: A dog collar, a leash, a food dish and water bowl. With this equipment, you can keep your dog healthy and active. For example, you have to have a collar because if you lose you dog or your dog ran away, you can always look for the name collar.

To take care for your dog, it must be looked after. You must take you dogs to the vet if they are sick. They need injections to protect them. The reason why you have to take your dog to the vet or to get an injection because keep it healthy and be safe.  For example, you have to take it to the vet for monthly check.

In conclusion, all different kinds of dogs need food equipment, care, and they all a lot of fun. Dogs can be your best friend so that is why they are one of my favourite animal.  

Tuesday, 3 May 2016

Prefix: Sub

Paragraph - Prefix: Sub

9 Words:
  • Subterranean -  Gone underneath earth’s surface
  • SubZero - Temperatures below zero
  • Submarine -  A vehicle that can go underwater
  • Subordinate - The rank below or ranke under the captain
  • Submerge - To go underwater
  • Subliminal - A message inside a message
  • Subway - Underground Train Station
  • Subtext - Underlying the theme
  • Subject - A person who is been dealt with.


As the submarine submerged through the subzero temperatures of the ocean, The captain called to the other subordinate subjects who had been listening to Mariah Carey searching for subliminal messages. While they had gone more subterranean that they had crashed into a subway. Through this whole commotion, the cook had been in the bathroom reading the subtexts of the latest Woman’s Weekly.

Today, In groups, we have made paragraph using sub words. Sub means below/under. We had to use nine sub words and put it in a story that we made up.  


Before we had to do the paragraph, we had to make a word wall full prefix:sub. We had to put in word what started with sub and means under/below

Monday, 4 April 2016

A Frightening Experience

A Frightening Experience

On Thursday, at home, while I was playing the guitar in my room I heard something in the living room. There were two women that appeared in my house. They were collect gave me a fright as my heart was pumping really fast. I was just about to scream but instead I didn't. I thought to myself never leave the door open because you never who could come into your home

Wednesday, 16 March 2016

Describe the Scene



One cold morning, the school was perfect and quite. Before school started a couple of friends started staring at something on the ground. As they looked they started to be worried about what they were looking at. It was blood.  Michael came and joined in the huddle. ”We have to go and hide”. Something bad has happened. They all started running to the boundary and hid the trees.


This is my narrative that I did for writing. I had to describe the picture for my writing. The picture that I was describing I put it into a introduction and put into 5 w's.

Wednesday, 17 February 2016

Streching Sentences



This is my presentation about stretching sentences with the 5 w's. In this presentation, it shows us that you can turn a boring sentences into a interesting sentences if you can do the 5 w's. The 5 w's is: Who, what, when, where, why. With those 5'w it can put our  boring writing into a  interesting.

Monday, 14 September 2015

Flipping E-book


This is my Flipping e-book that I have made today with Mrs Paton. Today I have been learning to put a Google Presentation on a Flip Snack. The presentation that I put in was my goal settings in term 3. In the presentation, It has all the thing that I want to achieve. It was the my first time doing and putting the presentation on the Flip Snack 

Thursday, 2 April 2015

My Recount BY Jane

2 months later. . .  After 2 months i started working at Starline School. Once I got their, all the children were happy to see me. I got in the classroom and all the children were playing in the class and throwing rulers around and children crying, I thought “maybe this isn't what it is said to the principal, maybe I’ve got something just to prove that my classroom is polite and nice.”

Friday, 27 March 2015

Spelling test




This my Spelling test that i did on a website. I have been practicing many words on this website. On this website i have learnt many different words like: Missiles, Grades, and loads of words. As you can see, at the top were it says grade, I have 76% words that are right and i think couple wrong. Here is a link to the website:The typing test

Tuesday, 17 March 2015

Spelling Bee



A new word i learnt was risk. The most difficult word to remember how to spell was magnifiect. Joushua received his netbook book. I used recevied in my sentene to show I know the meaning

Tuesday, 24 February 2015

Time Connectives

Time Connectives

Mengchun and her brother loved to play in the long grass in a forest. They would wriggle around and hide in the grass. A mower came to mow the grass. It cut all of the grass. The grass was short with nowhere to hide. They threw the grass in the air and run under it. When  they got home, they got a growling from their mum. They needed to have a shower and wash their hair and body.


Monday, 7 April 2014

Monday Quick Write By JMT

Saving somebody Life

One day there was a fire in a house and a family was there. This happened in a country called new Zealand.  The fire started when a  mum went to cook something and she went back to the sitting room and she did not know that she  had left the oven on for a while.

A little boy went to turn off the oven but he turned it up to make a fire but he didn't know that it going to start a fire. The fire started when the boy left to go his room to read or make a call to his friend.

While the family was watching T.V the baby was crying because she knew that there was a fire starting in the kitchen. The mum did not know what going on with the baby so she look around the house and look what is  making baby crying.

The mum went in the kitchen and she find a FIRE so she went to the sink and get a bucket of water and tip it in the fire but the fire got bigger and bigger and she did not know what to do so she went to grab the family and went out of the house.

She counted every body but she knew that somebody is missing. So she was about to go in the house but she can't go the in house because the house might fall on her.

Suddenly a Super Hero come to save a child life. So he went pass the family and the mum said "batman". So Batman went in the house and go in the room to save the child life while he was about to go in the room the child still talking on the phone to his phone.

Batman came out with the child. The child was crying while Batman  was taking him out of the house and the family safe after all.


THE END    

Monday, 25 March 2013

My Eastern beach recount.

    My time at  Eastern Beach           


One crazy morning I ran to school because I knew that today is picnic day.When I hopped on the bus with my mum..My mum said”we are going to Eastern Beach. and I said “I never been to Eastern Beach before”.When I hopped off the bus. I was very excited to put our feet in the water.”Mum said wait don’t jump in the sea. First the year 7 and 8’s have to swim and kayak.My mum played vollyball while I climbed the tree.When I got off the tree  I played with my mum.. My sister june and I had lunch and morning tea. At  Eastern Beach my friend Leilani and I played in the sea . We went to climb the tree at the other side. My mum told me to get off the tree. My and my mum and my sister  june played  volleyball. When I went to my mum she said “go get two apples for you and your sister. When I hopped on the bus we went back to Panmure Bridge School.

Friday, 1 March 2013

My Art Reflection


Reflecting on my Silhouette Painting

1. Are you pleased with your Silhouette painting? why / why not?

Yes because my animal was very good and my

2. What did you find easy when you created your silhouette?.
the sunset because the folds in the paper helped.
3. What part did you find tricky when you were creating your Silhouette painting? -think about blending of colours, tracing round your animal and painting within your animal it.
the tracing around my animal and painting my animal because the tracing was hard to see.

4. Who / What helped you when you were painting?
miss paton helped me by giving me instrctions  

5. What would you do differently next time? Think about: blending of colours, animal choice, presentation.
I will do my painting prettyer.
6. What frustrated you when you created your Silhouette painting?
the tracing my of my animal.