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Monday 7 April 2014

Monday Quick Write By JMT

Saving somebody Life

One day there was a fire in a house and a family was there. This happened in a country called new Zealand.  The fire started when a  mum went to cook something and she went back to the sitting room and she did not know that she  had left the oven on for a while.

A little boy went to turn off the oven but he turned it up to make a fire but he didn't know that it going to start a fire. The fire started when the boy left to go his room to read or make a call to his friend.

While the family was watching T.V the baby was crying because she knew that there was a fire starting in the kitchen. The mum did not know what going on with the baby so she look around the house and look what is  making baby crying.

The mum went in the kitchen and she find a FIRE so she went to the sink and get a bucket of water and tip it in the fire but the fire got bigger and bigger and she did not know what to do so she went to grab the family and went out of the house.

She counted every body but she knew that somebody is missing. So she was about to go in the house but she can't go the in house because the house might fall on her.

Suddenly a Super Hero come to save a child life. So he went pass the family and the mum said "batman". So Batman went in the house and go in the room to save the child life while he was about to go in the room the child still talking on the phone to his phone.

Batman came out with the child. The child was crying while Batman  was taking him out of the house and the family safe after all.


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1 comments:

Unknown said...

Well done Jane. I can see you thought about your orientation and conclusion.

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