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Monday 16 May 2016

Shoe Narrative

I was just lying around as I saw someone walking towards me,he was going to pick me up but he heard his phone ringing. “Ring, ring, ring.” He picked his phone up and started talking as if it was his boss that was talking to him. He was staring at me like I was staring at him back. He finished talking has he was putting his phone down ,he looked at me as if he was thinking to put me on... He walked towards me and picked me up...  He put one foot in and put another foot in me... Left to Right. We walked out of the house and I heard a puddle call my name. “Lefty, Righty” says the puddle. We walked in the puddle. I was has dirty and wet he didn't want me again so he took lefty and righty off and started to leave them on the road has he ran away. After a little while,a little boy came and pick me up and started walking me home.

This is my writing. I was writing with a partner. We did a challenge were we have to sit back to back and write our own sentence. By this is we did this plan together, we would have the same ideas what to write.

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